Sleep There Sleep Comments

'Be there near the forest of love Unless get you. Or sleep dear sleep until I call you! '..missing someone so deeply. Very nice. Can feel the pain dripping from lines.10+++

Fine poetic musings, dreary about how death, like a fine ode. You wrote and expressed excellently. Thumbs up. Pleez do write your thoughts under my newest poem too, titled, dark skinned vs fair skin, I would love to hear your views

This is a nice poem of anxiety of a mother.

Thank you very much for your kind comment.Actually,I feel encouraged if I get such response.

This is nice to see your poem after a long time. While sun shines brightly people feel sweating. People are more sick. Death is a truth and a person sleeps gently in deepness to renew life. But killing or pushing towards darkest domain is thought provoking. Still sleeping deeper in bed of death amazes mind. A brilliant poem is wisely penned excellently basing on perception of reality...10