Sleep! Sleep! Sleep! Comments

Nice chant, might be used as a mantra. Read mine - Mantra - Adeline

........very nice...when we are in the mist of sleep it feels nice...especially with a little cool breeze...enjoyed this beautiful poem...

Sleep, sleep, sleep It’s magnificent and nice, With dreams beyond wonder, Sleep! sleep! sleep! Sleep, sleep, sleep Eyes tightly closed, A little smile on you r cheeks, Feeling the warm sensations Of the pure and precious sleep,

some say sleep is what we would miss most if we had to live without it...it's true. those of us that have trouble sleeping usually end up with 'suicide' on how they died. really, it should have said 'insomnia'. feels like your living one long day...i know from experience. nice poem! ! i like how you used the chant throughout. keep writing! ! I live on a 24 hour clock with cat-naps, sleep? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

some say sleep is what we would miss most if we had to live without it...it's true. those of us that have trouble sleeping usually end up with 'suicide' on how they died. really, it should have said 'insomnia'. feels like your living one long day...i know from experience. nice poem! ! i like how you used the chant throughout. keep writing! !