Sleep Safe Comments

A tender and consoling piece, very nice indeed.

I like this poem overall, but especially 'sleep safe' repetition which makes it really soothing. Your poetry is that of compassion. You're a man of compassion. I am glad you let yourself be discovered.

Brotha', I've only read a few of your poems & I must say that in some way or another, I can relate. I'm going to make a point to read all of your work! I think u are extremely talented. Keep writting bout your life experiences because (like many of us) you've got a story to tell! !

Hi Dave..first..I would like to say thank u for ur nice comment in my poem November Rain.. :) ...and for your poem Sleep Safe..you really did a great job! ! ..nice poem.. :) ..

a safe sleep will always be a prize for a child i see innocence and peace.your poem is nice.

Its a good job done i liove that its like ur telling me a story

So soothing and caring a message.....a nocturnal flying sleep as it would be..well written and the way of saying it..

A soft lullaby.. Very beautiful.. Nice work..

This is beautiful, a little repetitive but all and all its sweet

Beautiful filling inside the feeling here...shelter the night with rest of calmness... 'Child in the night...nothing hurt you anymore' sounds like a child stop thinking about the fears when it lost in a dream...by the voice of calming..Like it, finally poem hunter let me comment on this.. :) _Unwritten SOul

beautiful, sweet words.

a beautiful way to end the day!

Great poem, surely and it's a comfort to any child that hears it. I agree with Claudia, however I don't stutter like her.

A very moving poem that I can identify with. Well expressed, well done-good job!

A very moving poem that I can identify with. Well expressed, well done-good job!

A very beautiful and poetic lullaby.

sweet moving poem, Dave. Well done