Monday, January 30, 2006

Sleep's Uncharted Ocean Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a wide and frothy sea
I dream it’ll wash over me
Longed for tides of tranquillity
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Lea Simpson
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Chuck Audette 01 February 2006

Excellent poem, again. Rather unsettling image in the excellent closing lines, and the perfect use of the slight discord of the last rhyme (a slant rhyme, I think I just read somewhere) . -chuck

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