Sleep is elusive
Hard to catch with eyes open
And an active mind
Like a star beyond my reach
I'm longing for it tonight
I lost count of time
Tossing and turning in bed
Sleep is far away
An elusive star flying
In somebody's dream tonight
Like a star beyond my reach I'm longing for it tonight Insomnia, so well defined. Marvelous! !
Like a star beyond our reach, this sleep is very illusive and full of dreams. This Tanka is definitely very brilliant and amazing Tanka...10
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Magnificent write, Nudershada. You capture an elusive star. Yes, I do adhere to this write. It resonates with me.10