Monday, April 22, 2019

Sleep Is A Beast Comments

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Sleep is a beast rarely found
when searched for with open eyes.
It crawls from beneath your bed
when least expected,
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Jenny Kalahar
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 March 2020

You awaken as a captive released from a cell you'll instantly forget or remember in your peripheral vision your waking lifetime long..... Sleep is personified. today when i sleep i may see Mr. Sleep hiding on my bed. thank you. so vivid are your images. t ony

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Jenny Kalahar 23 March 2020

Thank you, Tony! Keep well, fellow poet! - Jenny

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 May 2019

Sleep is milky black before mutating into colors shapes people you once loved or feared. Sleep becomes endless acreage without scent or sense, an original poem. your thinking is original and presentation. thank u. tony

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Jenny Kalahar

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