On the banks of Ganges
I sat in a serene and sombre mood
Looking at the playful water
as the wind like a great artist
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Deep longing expressed in subtle language... beautiful, wanted to give it five star, but due to some error it is showing one star. Sorry for that. I am new to this site.
Oh, excellent, beautifully beautifully painted! .. And i mean Wow! .. Such beautiful deep heart and beauty! .. Definite 5 Stars ++++++++++++...................... Beautifully expressed! .. Again Thank you for sharing! ..
A poem more than worthy of a reread, a poem of calm and love that gently flows over and consumes its reader with its more than soft and most tenderly written lines. Thank you good Tony and I wish you well. Another five shining stars and take care good sir. And keep writing, for I and many others will keep reader your poems of love, hope and beauty.
Very nice depiction of a lone sitting on the banks of the river -deeply noting the affection to nature. Nice apt visual. Thanks .. I like it
It's an amazingly beautiful poem, very well composed and the setting is perfect. Brilliantly done. Thank you so much.
A sumptuous and meditative work with soothing imagery, if nature is the canvas of the divine power this poem epitomizes the physical beauty with equal power in words. You have captured a marvelous moment and have made it immortal in these words. Beautiful imagery, perfect.
The imagery is stellar as it is vibrant, and conveys the themes of the divines power of nature.
A sumptuous and beautiful poem that conveys the bounty of nature under the hand of the divine.
Beautiful poem. I love the description of the water and the wind at play.
Very tender lines of goodness! The lovers in the world inspire! Nice work Brother
beautiful poem from beautiful soul.. clear feeling.. very much deserving...10 Mild aspect Thursday, July 2,2020 5: 29 AM fire keeps the torch burning And turning the ambition Into the reality With all the blessings from an almighty Hasmukh Mehta
personification is used well. The poet brought water to life like a human with his poetry A lovely poem shows poet's power of observation Ganges is holy and your description Is also holy, holy Molly! 10 + rated and voted.
A great poem weaving a great picture written by a great poet. 10++ And may God Bless and Keep you good Tony.
Sleep together lovingly in the arms of God.....God is always with us. Sleeping in his arm is best love. The concluding line is much impressive and meaningful. A brilliant poem is amazingly shared by you dear Dr Tony, thank you.
Loved your poem, your poem soothes the reader just like the wind