Sunday, November 22, 2020

Sleep In Peace Covid Free Or Sleep Too Long Too Deep Comments

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pollen is in the air everywhere it does not fill with fear
hay fever a runny nose irritated eyes where pollen hides
seasonal normal does not fill with fear an irritation we bear
new disease covid 19 pollen in the skies deadly tells no lies
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Terence George Craddock
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Deluke Muwanigwa 22 November 2020

Thanks bard. Yeah the world has become a small sickly. This is the time to become humans.

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Varsha M 22 November 2020

This is really true sir. I liked your way of expression.. little droplets floating waiting for you to come along to breathe little droplets landing waiting for you to come along to touch And waiting for new RNA to manufacture Raising another fleet to bold out the innocent Sometimes life is such cruel that they kill the gentle....good poetry sir.

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L MILTON HANKINS 22 November 2020

Well done! The repeated phrases are most effective, and the rhymes very interesting, intended or not! Keep writing, my friend.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 November 2020

An insightful poem so appropriate in this time of uncertainty. Well crafted and conveyed.

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