Sunday, July 7, 2013

Sleep, His Brother And Me... Comments

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I would like to sleep a lot
But 'sleep is the brother of death', Oscar Wild said
And what shall I do?
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Valerie Dohren 16 July 2013

Dreamless slumber may indeed seem like death. Interesting write Dinesh.

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Sai Koushik 14 July 2013

what a death brother of sleep

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Bright Morn 14 July 2013

Death, the brother of sleep, if its true then all of us die for some time daily, this death provide us much comfort and leads us to another world, of our unconsious and dreams, if death is really a brother of sleep then it should not be feared for it will be a comfort and relief from worldy hardship and a threshold to the world here after, the poem is excellent with great thoughts, well done sir.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 11 July 2013

Profound thoughts encapsulated in this beautiful poem provides a rich experience.The last triplet well emphasizes the fact that the brother of sleep will surely embrace us some day which is absolutely true!

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Hazel Durham 11 July 2013

Permanent sleep is what we will all one day experience, you have written so beautifully on a sad subject and given it a dignified conclusion!

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Melikhaya Zagagana 09 July 2013

cool, brother just the way it ways. i like it.

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Valsa George 08 July 2013

Yes, the brother of Sleep will definitely embrace us oneday or the other and we enter a sleep of no dreams! It is a reality that cannot be shunned or disputed! A powerful write Dinesh!

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Kavya . 08 July 2013

a very nice poem Sir......very aptly described sleep as the brother of Death: -)

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