Sleep Forever Comments

look at the sun. and the moon, and the chirping birds. see a flower. flower knows it will die soon. but still it is happy to dance in the wind...... so is our life...... meditate. God is there for u. you are never alone and we poets are there always for u.. tony

Depression gives thought of suicide. This poem is sensitive and thought provoking. Amazing sharing is done definitely...10

When we say we want to sleep forever, we forget about what happens in death. Your poem responds to what is happening. Far better to write about the positivity of being alive. Also, the beauty of nature.