Sleep Deprivation (Haiku) Comments

short, nice but a complete poem in itself. good job.

Yeah, i completely believe that idea. we should use our times as well as we can. this poem is so meaningful and enjoyable Well done

Oh, so you're doing haiku now? I like how the longest line ends with the word short. It's kind of ironic, and makes the short days feel like they actually drag out. And I like the inversion making night the last word, paralleling night coming at the end of the day, which is the first word of the clause. I'm probably over-analyzing it... Anyway, your haiku is awesome. :)