Wednesday, August 31, 2011

Sleep And Other Anachronisms Comments

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Sleep lies caught up in the curtains, in day times;
Curled in on itself, against the brightness of the day,
Squinting among the abandoned dreams from last night,
Still lying scattered, like discarded New Year's decorations.
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Patti Masterman
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Vipins Puthooran 01 September 2011

I wondered when i looked to the placing of words...a wonderful imaginated thought...those who read it must be wanting to read it again like me.. I guess..

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Jim Troy 01 September 2011

Very nice to read and enjoy and consider many things.. I love reading this one as I would a favorite book. So put together and crisp and intelligent in wording and thoughts. Shows how brilliant and highly versatile a writer you really are.. Such a marvelous talent........... Jim Troy

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