Sleep And Death Comments
The wall between my mind and soul
takes away my might as a whole.
I lay here
lifeless, motionless and still,
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like the poem/story, , for me the poem needs a little work...still worth reading.
I loved the way you arranged the words in you poem. I felt pleasure in reading them. Losing in the depth of dreams, me immersed in me. What a thought. Sleep is half death Nice work
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7/27/2025 6:40:11 PM # 1.0.0
really a nice poem. Just luvd the way you xpressd your thoughts with beautiful words