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I need to sleep
I need its strengthening
I need its peaceful arms enfolding me
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So beautifully crafted and well expressed poem. Very heartfelt. To my favorites.
I always idolize people who can share their pains and sufferings. People who are in their shoes could in one way or another derive their strength to hurdle their difficulties in life.
This beautiful poem is like a novel crafted in just few paragraphs. A story of the agony of a loving mother and her beloved daughter, how they go through the difficulties of life. This is how great poetry works where you could deliver to a reader a great story in just a very short time.
Wow! Thank you Rose Marie, your reference to this being like a novel touched my heart. I am writing a series of novels.
This comment was very meaningful and encouraging to me, Rose Marie. You give me hope for success in the writing of novels!
A deeply poignant and touching but so beautiful poem that reaches the deepest part of heart and very soul. A reader's emotions could easily swayed by the flow of words that were coined so heartily and honestly.
Cont.3..The words of my late grandmother were like in a tape recorder played twice a day and I know that sleep avoided her because she was always reading her bible and keeping herself busy
When my uncle had this terminal illness, my late grandmother always talked to God at 6am and at 6pm, kneeling and praying to God to take all the pains and sickness of my late uncle and pass them all to her because is a lot older and she can't live without him.
My dear, Susan, every line of this very touching and deeply poignant poem resonates with me. And as I read every word, the words of my late grandmother reverberate in my mind and tears clouded my eyes, the same way when when I wrote my poem, the Agony of a Mother and the Love Of My Mother
2. It feels great to see that the three most talented women poets adorn the top positions with their super poems. Congratulations to all of them
The poem of Susan Williams is placed at position #12 in the Best Poems of Members on PoemHunter. Next comes the Haiku "Wild Flowers" by Rose Marie. And in position #14 is Geeta with her new poem "Poet Richard W- A Tribute"…
Susie, this poem of your soul continues on top of the chart… it will
Thank you, my friend... I didn't know it was on the charts until you told me! ! ! I thank you for caring about my poetry! ! ! You are so kind.
I don't know if my previous response went through. If not, I'll say it again---thank you for caring about the status of this poem on the chart--you are sweet to care! !
Scaled one position. It is at #11 today. Congratulations
Hundred stars for this poem seems frivolous. It goes much beyond any numbers. God bless you Susan
Pain stands like a mighty demoness, inflicting pain inch by inch. The mother stands so helpless watching her beloved daughter. Dear friend Susan, May God bestow on you enough strength and courage to brave this stormy pain. on you
Thank you for your gentle understanding of the pain that drives this write--I cannot call it a poem, it is just trying to get the pain out and you my friend so understand this. Thank you.
A magnificent poem that goes beyond the heart, straight into the soul. As Sandra says, i am fumbling for words.
Very heart-touching write! Beautifully poignant! I am overwhelmed. Profound and meaningful with a touch of suspense.
This poem has moved one position up to #11. Congratulations, Susie
Today this poem ranks @#12. Congratulations, Susie
Magnificent write...... enjoyed thoroughly.....thank u, dear poetess....
A wonderful poem.... appreciated the personification of pain. Top score for this thoughtful write.
Thank you, my good friend--if this finds a place in your heart and soul then it pleases me, ranking or no ranking
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7/25/2025 1:43:43 AM # 1.0.0
Touching piece. Words dripping- in pain