Wednesday, October 3, 2018

Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am tired but
This is not the tired I am able to satisfy with sleep
Not the sleep you know of
It can be satisfied with my sleep
...
Read full text

Struggling Poetry
COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 12 October 2018

I wrap my arms around you as well Loosely, for all my energy has been drained And the salty water present on your cheeks is now present on mine I close my eyes and fall asleep.sadness, love, care, concern. being sorry.......... a very fine poem of love and loss.. thank u. tony

0 0 Reply
Jazib Kamalvi 08 October 2018

Write comment. A great start, Struggling. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success