Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

Encased pupils rapidly moving
Erstwhile yawns extend to snoring
Bliss setting in to dreaming
Some humans airily walking
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Indira Renganathan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 November 2017

Some humans airily walking Some humans merrily talking Aperture on the iris best awaiting The mind early or late signalling -Beautiful poetic imagination..Its a nice poem with beautiful flow and rhyme..10 -

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Indira Renganathan 08 November 2017

thanks a lot for your kind comment Dillip

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