Friday, December 28, 2012

Sleep Comments

Rating: 4.9

When the things of this world seems hard to bear
Remember there is a God who really cares
He watches over us as we lie down to sleep
He knows our every thoughts no matter how deep
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Patricia Grantham
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Sofia Kioroglou 10 December 2015

lovely poem! Sleep is a special gift from our almighty God! it was a really good read!

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Valsa George 22 July 2015

Sleep is a balm to tired minds! A night without sleep will be dreadful! Prayer helps one slip slowly into the arms of Sleep! Enjoyed this free flowing and rhyming poem Pat!

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Khairul Ahsan 26 June 2014

Sleep is a bliss that comes as a special gift from God, a state of 'spiritual blessedness'. I liked your poem, you have so eloquently described the wretchedness of the ones who cannot sleep at night, and the blessedness of those who can. Fortunately enough, I fall in the latter group. I liked the comment of Mr. Tirupathi Chandrupatla too. Rated this wonderful poem with full marks,10/10!

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Benefits of sleep are many. Blessed are those who can take nap in a flash in this noisy world. Nice thoughts.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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