Thursday, March 8, 2012

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When the lids become heavy

and the eggs turn a shade of red
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Nyaniba Kwenu Smith
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Nyaniba Kwenu Smith 31 March 2012

Thanks Wahab. I really appreciate your comment. I'd be sure to read yours.

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Wahab Abdul 08 March 2012

THIS IS A MARVELLOUS PIECE OF ART …………………………………….. What a nice poem IT IS! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us. please read some of mine.ESPECIALLY ‘’I WANT TO DIE’’ i made your poem as my favourite pom

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