Wednesday, October 16, 2013

Slaying Dragon Flies Comments

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Whosoever dreams of dragon flies
Knows not of those who tell him lies
The cause may be that he is not all there
Of course that might be splitting hair
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Lento Maez
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Khairul Ahsan 22 October 2013

Your poem looks neat and nice, rhymes good but may I say that I didn't quite get what you meant. A small note, perhaps? ?

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