*slayer*#* Comments

humor poetry..nice one though needs few editings my friend...Loved your poem.

I like this very cool..

this is cool :) -ryan

that poemis good i really like it

in a single long word you are everything and im nothing im blind everything's fake i can only see you cause you are real.....nice write, thhanks

its really good, but the last line looses me, i don't get it, but maybe i'm not supposed to?

This is nice...she really likes it lol I do too =]

beautiful, she loves it... :) mill.

I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ....Your the best side kick i've EVER had! ! ...This was soooo sweet! ! ! thank you sooooooo much! ! ! ! <3Payyton! ! ! !

The song at the end of this poem reminded me about my childhood days when we used to sing this song in great ardour. Your poem is cute. Thanks. arya