Slay You Demon.. Comments

I liked it thank you for sharing

SPIRAL of energy: Your plan for breaking me up Showed me my weakness Which makes me to work on it. When I see your heartrending It shows me that I can beat you. When you get angry, that shows me that I won

From your punishment I got creativity. A lovely poem showing goodness does defeat evil in our everyday lives. Well done Sahra. Worth my vote.

Verily, a lovely description of the negative and positive forces that dominate the humans. Loved reading it.........10

There is always a demon in us hiding and influencing us to do bad things. thank you for this poem. dev

Congrats. The poem talks about countering the negativity in life to one's advantage. Amazing one. Thanks for sharing, Sahra. I would like to quote a few lines from the poem: Your shouting I got from a lot of angry Which made my heart stronger. As well from your punishment I got creativity which made me diligent.

Well done, Sahra. Congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day!

Courage! ! To overcome the odds. Thanks for sharing.

The undefeatable spirit! Congratulations.

What an inspiring poem that illustrates the strength, diligence, and resilience of the speaker! The poem evolves from beginning to end. It is an anthem of sorts that shows the reader that even in a difficult life, where there may be oppressors, within the self, within the family, within the community, or within our world, an individual can stand up and say, NO MORE! You write: I got the top of mountain I got hammer to beak the wall I let my self to believe my dreams Rather then your fears. I will not put my heard down any more You can't stop me! Nicely written poem Sahra. Keep writing...

It shows me that I can beat you. When you get angry, that shows me that I won Weakness, realization of weakness, then rising from the ashes to become great. you have positive determination. that is the sign of greatness., tony

The poem shows undefeated spirit that can turn an adversity to a positive resolution.Well done.Enjoyed reading.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - 10

Nice self audit, a beautiful poem.

This one I like.10/10 Very striking title as well

seeing one's own weaknesses, good writing.