Friday, January 2, 2015

Slay The Beast Comments

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We stray from Eden to our fate ponder,
W'out that tree of life now to rest under.
Then came the beast as if our doom he's sworn.
Fearsome. Like from no woman he was born.
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Chinedu Dike 02 January 2015

A well articulated train of thoughts, well encapsulated into a lovely poem. I like the spiritual insight and penning of the piece as it captured from disobedience in Garden Of Eden to beyond inevitable Day Of Great Tribulation. A lovely poem with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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