Thursday, October 5, 2017

Slay Ride Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've given up my try to figure out
humanity and riddles of the times
where gods and demons hide in toxic fog
with truth concealed in foolish nursery rhymes
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 05 October 2017

A great poem, Barry.In front of me the scene painting so beautifully human's brave courage to defend life.Thinking of translating it, I find it difficult to render slay ride, the loping looping sound

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Barry Middleton 06 October 2017

Slay ride is a pun. Probably in-translatable. Loping is the ate of a wolf, the way it moves - to lope. Lupine just means wolf like.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 October 2017

Dtermination of a brave man! The best poem for a reader is that poem in which the reader starts thinking this poem has been written for him (the reader) and when I read this poem I thought it's me who has been described in it.

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