Friday, November 17, 2006

Slaves Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pushing yourself to the limits
With Head held high
Slogging to reach the arduous targets
Before life says goodbye.
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Bhakta Raj Giri 20 November 2006

Excellent piece. Thought well expressed. I thought as if I am reading some Shakespeare's sonnets. Very true! Time rots e/th. Regards Bhakta

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Asma Bahrainwala 20 November 2006

an excellent poem, preets... a very thoughtful one indeed! love... Asma...

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Sandra Fowler 17 November 2006

You are very wise. Season by season time slips through our fingers and is gone. I like these lines by an unknown writer, 'The bird of time has not far to fly, and the bird is on the wing.'. Fine work, Preeti. Warm regards, Sandra

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 November 2006

Well penned work, Preti

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