Tuesday, March 21, 2006

Slavenly Freed From Uglied Past. Comments

Rating: 5.0

A slave i was born...
To run and run and run till there was no more master's to run
from those days wasted on the plantation, sweating while making
to toil.
...
Read full text

Michael Gale
COMMENTS
Patti Masterman 03 November 2007

I really like the sentence structures and adjectives you choose. This is interesting and full of emotion.

0 0 Reply

SIR MICHAEL...JUST GOT FINISHED READING A VERY GRAPHIC CHRONOLOGY OF THE ABOLITIONISTS& THE CIVIL WAR...QUITE COMPELLING...WHAT THESE SLAVES WENT 5HROUGH WAS UNFATHOMABLE....LINCLN WAS THE RIGHT MAN IN THE RIGHT PLACE... AND YOU SIRMJ ARE DA RIGHT POET W/ DA RIGHT POEM THATGREAT inTENt...'''''''frank

0 0 Reply
Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
Close
Error Success