Sunday, April 3, 2016

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he was drowned in the ocean of burned and dry leaves in the jungle of nothing in nowhere

when he got up he noticed a tattered and shabby shackle in distance
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Moahammad Maleki
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Susan Williams 31 August 2020

Quite a story written in verse.... very imaginative

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 October 2016

Wow a great freeverse in super metaphor wonderfully presented in ballade style. Thumbs up. Pls do review my latest poem too called poetry commentary.....

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Menato San 04 April 2016

Wow it's really beautiful. Nice work

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