Slaughter Comments

Read your poem with voice reader. Also heard the video. Thanks for a nice poignant poem

so cynically written, it honors it's subject the most. When politicians are merely but commercial figures, ideas, aspirations and hopes are transcendent to ghosts.

Aloha Gary... Quite the resume... Yes, I do read the bios... you touch on some troubling materials with this post... vague and multi-directional... allusive and yet offering a peek at a more potentially enticing work... with the extent of your involvement to date... would you be cajoled into adding a bit more detail... such as persons, places, and or things owned by these particular Who... their, and them, or he and she... these suggestive nodules do not entice the profound, in a potential down stream thought... I too, have travelled this globe... choosing to walk most of the way... or the trains... or river craft... rarely entertaining myself with social functions above the sitting circle under the night skies, or the trek through the sands at high noon... met many a familiar... had the grandest of discussions... and listened to stories... the old ones... I suppose that I am making this bevy of comments as my call... I have enjoyed myself these last few moments... reliving some of my more memorable exploits and attempting to gather material for a intriguing retort to the context of your words herein... I call this, bouncing, a making of a play at finding the message within a better writers works... you can catch me in the cloud to see some examples... Thank you again for posting here at ph.c All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.