Tuesday, May 30, 2006

'Slanting Into Light' Comments

Rating: 5.0

I suppose death is something
our bones are born knowing, and
no matter how much you truly love yourself,
it's a secret they will never tell your heart.
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Amberlee Carter
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Uriah Hamilton 01 June 2006

A great poem finding beauty and death in love and lovers.

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Joseph Daly 30 May 2006

This s such a wonderful piece, Amberlee. At first the opening line had me feeling doubtful, but this poem of the perception of what is the world and the blurring of the line between the outside and the personal worlds is quite excellent. There were moments of T.S. Elliot in there but they were not ale imitations.

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Goldy Locks 30 May 2006

'my sails empty of wind'...this was beautiful, Amberlee.

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