Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Slangin' In The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beyond the skyscraper a new world opened before his very eyes.
Everything became quiet. An old man rummaged in the trash.
Three guys went by him. And he was in the empty ways of his childhood's countryside.
He got excited and gave the girl the Denim finger. The peach opened in his fingers.
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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello
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Onelia Avelar 20 May 2008

All the senses are challenged - with tomatoes, fruits, the flowers, an old man, the smile of the mother - like a fast moving kaleidoscope. It provokes kind of nostalgia...

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Abha Sharma 15 May 2008

The fruits, flowers the little girl well depict the countryside mood and scene reminding the songs of WORDSWORTH…the contrast is well drawn…. A completely different sentiment… Abha

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