Thursday, September 5, 2019

Slammed Comments

Rating: 5.0

"That hand,
I searched for
All my life,
That smile
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Sandra Feldman
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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 September 2019

Life is truly frustration-fraught. Let despair pass us by and let’s hope for the better. A well crafted composition, dear Ma’am Sandra...10++++

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Kostas Lagos 06 September 2019

Impressive poem, fascinating expressions

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Prabir Gayen 06 September 2019

All had died, In one last sigh, As Night Gave Life's door A great big slam! Without, compassion.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 September 2019

A poignant write. Yes, sometimes life is like that. Without compassion. Delivers us to nothingness. A vivid portrayal of great despair. Superb imagery.

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