I Try to read the verse
Line to line
'Skype' pops in
And stops the rhyme
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Being decoyed and seduced by the beauty of technology, I know how that feels! Deb
My cry! , my cry? And deafness I must defy Can you really hear me sigh? ? This was in my opinion the most interestingly crafted part, my favourite. I don't really understand it, but overall a novel idea.
didn't quite get it, but this line ' be romantic, so innocent is its touch' is a poem in itself, keep up the spirit
you are not alone Howard... i have fel this feeling too, I though u did notice... thanks for sharing and thanks for the invitation message... xoxo
sweet.....ea...u write gd....oh...bt u cd use a lil full sentence...cz it wz a lil bit tuff 2 understand...: D...tc..
A poem that grabs your attention. Most intriguing to read!
Heey Howard, this poem of yours is really good, I mean it's really fantastic. You got a talent for sure!
Howard, I really liked your poem. You have poetic flair. If I may make a suggestion? Proof-read your poem(s) before submitting them.
howard, yo poem was SWEET! very romantic an true, keep it up,
Wow! What an awesome poem Howard! ! ! Thanks so much for the honourable mention...: -) One of these fine days...I'll write a poem again! Hugs, Dee
I loved it Howard, thanks for putting me in it. What a great honor! Now if I can just get the page up again to take it as a favorite. GW62
Hi! I really found your poem nice because it talks about something very true and real. You've chosen the right approrpiate words for all the situations. Hope I can read more and more for you. Try to read my other poems too.