Tuesday, August 11, 2009

Skyland Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a dark sky
Without a moonshine
Just stars glimmering
Like cornelians sewn to a black cloth
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FARAH ALIAH
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Mimi Fakhira 16 August 2009

Yup, I gotta admit, I'm kinda loosing that unique intelligence too. This is so much better than my poem, Cloudland! Keep it up: D

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Danny H 11 August 2009

You have such a wonderful imagination. Reminds me of myself When i was a lot younger with one of my best friends we were like attached emotionaly side by side and i thought of the weirdest, craziest funnest games to play. i made tons of them each day :) Wonderful Poetry. Keep up the unique intellegence everyone is loosing now adays

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FARAH ALIAH

FARAH ALIAH

Negeri Sembilan, Malaysia
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