Skyfall (A Riddle To Solve) Comments
Beware young sparrow
A handsome foe strikes quickly
Winged god of the sky
Petite soaring on soft wind
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Simply wonderful write with picturesque poetic narration. Wow!
But I don't think this is a RIDDLE: 'A proposition so framed as to exercise one's ingenuity in discovering its meaning; an ambiguous, complex, or puzzling question offered for solution; an enigma; a dark saying. Anything abstruse, intricate, paradoxical, or puzzling; a puzzle.'
Hmm, it seems to fit that definition, doesn't it? I intended it to be a riddle. In some ways most poems seem like they have an element of riddle to them. Isn't that part of their charm?
Yes Michael, herb I've tried to include clues that allow for identification of a specific species.
Simplicity at its best. All is not as it seems. Excellent work.
Indeed a modern day weapon. Swift as sparrow and ready to attack and kill innocents. Great write.
A clever write embellished with crystalline images. Thought provoking.
Your positive remarks are valuable and very encouraging. Thank you so much! !
Eagle and Sparrow your poem tools? Unable to crack the riddle further. Good advice to all young things. Liked
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7/25/2025 9:05:30 AM # 1.0.0
I see death stalking life to grab it and everything in between seemed like just a dream. Awesome reminder...5***
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