Friday, January 13, 2012

Skye-Lit Dome Comments

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As simple and pure as a breath of rain she clears my mind with a peaceful undoubting love of innocence for her soul, and mine. Her smile makes me twinge as I walk below the skylight domes of paradise that sleep beneath an endless cosmic starry twilight across the sapphire blue.

In sight and sound and touch and taste I can think of any color and my palate would dance to green and red and purple - as her lips made way to part a smile on mine to sync with her fingers caressing my skin, the warmth of an intamite love of trust and want couldn’t have drapped over us more perfectly.
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Connor Whyte 10 July 2012

Strong use of imagery and keen and bright sense of words clear and easy to understand I can't say there is not one poem of yours that I have read that I don't dislike. I love your work and find myself a little inspired by you.

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