Sky Without An Address Comments

A fascinating poem with a fabulous title...loved it

I like 'Dew Drops shedtears.... ' except that, UNFORTUNATELY, the new format has, seemingly, messed up the spacing in parts of your poem, as the old format did at times. bri : )

Great imagery and your title is very fascinating....loved the way you got it.10++++

Sky without an address- -Wow- Such a beautiful imagery for expressing the feeling of sadness when we lose something very close to our heart. 'The moon shined on full moon night decreased and decreased and vanished one night the dark sky stood without an address....'

Colorful imagery in the sky without an address. Most telling reflections.

A touching imagery indeed. Congrats for aptly earned positioning and thanks for sharing.

Very nice piece. Well penned down.

Insightfully conceived and nicely crafted. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Kavin.

Captivating title that holds a beautiful poem.

A lovely poem that captures the wonders and beauty of nature. Great imagery. Liked the title. Congratulations !

Newly blown flower of love! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Beautiful rainbow with its wonderful seven colors when faded felt sad the blue sky.... The moon shined on full moon night decreased and decreased and vanished one night the darksky stoodwithoutanaddress.... - - - - -What a lovely write! Nature too shows its emotions in various ways!

Jasmine smiles and Rose too with thorns all around Breeze wonders when it enters the garden... What a wonderful imagination and lovely graphic. thank u dear poet. tony

That blooms one day will have to die next day. A poem with a strong imagery and nicely crafted to prove the point. 'The moon shined on full moon night decreased and decreased and vanished one night the darksky stoodwithoutanaddress....'.. is very nice. Congrats.

the dark sky stood without an address....// without moonlit the night sky is dark; if there is no sun of this universe there will be nothing without dark/// oh the dark cannot be any address! /// greatly written