Saturday, January 2, 2021

Sky War Comments

Rating: 5.0

The grass isn't greener this side
One or two flags already up...
They are vexing to assign lands
The sun is laughing
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 January 2021

The 🌞 is laughing... laughing at them... laughing at the border... wonderful. An excellent piece...5 stars

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me poet yeps poet 03 January 2021

I HAD READ AND RATED THIS BEFORE O PH OH GREAT POET

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 January 2021

Very poignant question, quite contemporary

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David Wood 02 January 2021

Man, always fighting never peaceful. Never doing good in the name of humanity. A good 5* poem.

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Captain Cur 02 January 2021

Fighting for dominion of land and outer space while we still cannot claim dominion of ourselves.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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