Sunday, April 26, 2020

Sky Shining Comments

Rating: 5.0

Brilliant winks, shine, on a sky yondering
Flashes, sparkles, glints, too high a soaring
Over above, long-reaching, hard to find
Their forlorn souls and a cherishing mind
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Daniel Miltz
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Irfanulla Shariff 26 April 2020

There is quite a bit of mindfulness in your poem. This is an excellent poem and can be used for mindful meditation. Magnificently composed. I really enjoyed reading it. All the best!

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