In blue skies
A twin flock of birds flies
the sky's eyes
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well after a long time i m reading one of yours sir.. this must be the first Haiku i v read of yours.. and this is great three lines to sore mental hearts indeed.. thanks for the treatment.. with love shan
Still more beautiful when the sky flutters its eyes......good sky-high
and i could se that eyes of the sky...beatiful image..
A wonderful haiku with a lot of imagery conveyed in a few words. Very well done and thank you for sharing your talent with us :)
what a beautiful vision... and I swear i did see it wink!