Blue sky,
blue sky.
Looking at you, wishing the day by.
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I love the last line, It's only in my mind. Disasters can befall anyone, but how we handle them is what matters; Yes, I agree; we need to be sky-minded, look at the broader picture. Thanks for sharing.
A very interesting poem with symbolic implications.. Thanks for sharing..
Black sky Green sky Orange sky Red sky Pink and yellow and mean sky.
Amazing expression of sentiments through the colours of sky. Great articulation. I quote: Pink and yellow and mean sky / Black sky / Green sky / Orange sky / Red sky / Pink and yellow and mean sky / Come on and roll in; it's only in my mind.
Swallowed stars! ! With the works of nature. Nice work.
Superb poem. Displayed bubbling enthusiasm and naughtiness in narrating motley shades of hues encompassed in the sky in poet's imaginations. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
In a unique style you said many things in this short poem. Thanks for sharing.
Nicely done about different colors of the sky and their significance.
I myself should say that you did a great job on starting and ending your poem. And to get to the point, I like the way you describe the color of different skies you see with your own eyes each day.