Sunday, November 13, 2016

Sky Is Not Too Far Comments

Rating: 4.8

When heart is filled with sunrise
And soul is thirsty for stars
Sky is not too far
When your thoughts are birds
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Nosheen Irfan
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Susan Williams 17 February 2017

Oh, yes, this poem made me want to lean into it. Such lovely lines of bravery and growth, encouragement and wisdom.... and again the loveliness. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Akhtar Jawad 22 November 2016

Hopes are always associated with a firm belief. A thoughtful poem.

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M Asim Nehal 17 November 2016

I see the bright sky which is not far from us and thanks to you, your poem made it possible. When your thoughts are birds And fear is no more a companion Sky is not too far...........Wonderful and inspiring poem.

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Valsa George 16 November 2016

Yes, sky is within your reach! A poem overflowing with hope and positiveness! Awesome write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 November 2016

Beautiful metaphorial poem has been presented bringing dreams and hope.....10

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Barry Middleton 13 November 2016

Lovely poem. It is hard for me to be optimistic these days. This poem makes my world a little brighter.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 13 November 2016

A thought provoking poem with touch of optimism Nosheen Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 November 2016

Positive thoughts of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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