Sky is fully loaded
As if exploded
Water all over
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Simple. James Pointer8 minutes ago Could do with more, but maybe the beauty is in the simpleness? Either way, there's something about it I liked. Comment +1 short but very visual
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Re: The sky is..... (Score: 1) by ddkwenda I think there is more that could be said, like definitive coz so far this does not feel like a completed poem, more of a thought beginning to develop into one. Reply to This | Parent | Delete Re: The sky is..... (Score: 1) by jadia4708au on Wednesday, October 23,2013 (21: 31: 39) it is in haiku for. less is full.. regards