Sky Is Falling Comments

this is very clear that your poem based on what is the essence of human and world. you manage to bring it into words which understandable and deeper meaning for people who can read beyond sentence.

We have remained as closely guarded Many praises and nicely worded

We are large family and galaxy of stars, Look so close but miles far

We are distinct and never collide Some of us may drift and slightly slide Leave high rays with friction of seconds Does not harm earth even for moments

sjy is full of unuseful objects....10

all useless objects are descending on earth....10

some debries are entries theatmosphere....10

many objects fall regularly....10

Great idea to write about, its truth sky is falling 10++

sky is full of aimless objects....10

Sky seems to be flooded and falling With distress signals and calling debries may fall any time and cause heavy damage...10

Sky seems to be flooded and falling it has turned int junk yard..10

Sky seems to be flooded and falling With distress signals and calling Aimlessly roam as foreign objects Slowly loosing their heights and become reject -------- poignant piece yet done outstanding with finest rhymes and diction...10+++

Sky seems to be flooded and falling With distress signals and calling it is mad race in the sky...10

Aimlessly roam as foreign objects Slowly loosing their heights and become reject sky is posing problem becasue of objects...10

Never falling but staying close Always smiling and ready to pose they are close but never collide...10

Almighty around but no one knows we have no eyes to see the almighty..10

What these foreign elements search here? Knowing not what and go to where? ....not worth exploring when so much porvety is there...10

Sky seems to be flooded and falling many foreign elements launched from the earth....10

We are distinct and never collide Some of us may drift and slightly slide we have uniform axis...10