Sky Is All Yours Comments

BEAUTIFUL WRITE.GREAT THOUGHT LINES. VOTED10 SURYA

Deependra you have a wonderful way with words...I have said it before and I say it again... you are an excellent poet... thanks for the invite Regards Alf

filled with best wishes........good one!

yes the sky is all yours...meaning you are free to dream, to do something about it, to face its chalenge, and of course to be what you are after all... the poem is an expression of deep concern to someone (as your dedication stated) ...however, it should be noted that freedom is always something you are bound with, 'we are born free, to be found in it'...thanks for the poem.

'...........................time to reflect on past glories to bury bitter memories to match a flowing stream to catch the next dream'... quoted lines are poetic good...bring in a wish an attitude that's good...

Sincere wishes from heart The poetic rhythm impart. CP

Excellent extended simile: Yesterday’s gone like disappearing clouds like vanishing stars like passing twilight like fading moonlight and excellent visual surrealistic metaphor: give wings to your dreams Excellent symbolistic poem, very well expressed 10++++++++++++

We must grab all of life's opportunities with both hands. I wish your friend well as he continues his studies.

well expressed..nicely done..expressive

and the glory is all yours, well write dear

We know the sky is the limit and you have given us that and much more in your poem. We are able to rest knowing that we can drift through the clouds and the stars through your great write. Very good write, I like the rhythm and structure. Your friend in poetry Lynn

Well Deependra I must say I found this poem most powerful! The lay out and rhyming scheme was brilliant! And the over theme was... as I said powerful! keep writing! Sayz :)