Sky From The Train's Window Comments

But the night show on sky is on and on…What a wonderful ending,

The beauty of nature! ! ! Nice work.

'' dancing to some emotional song of life '' - this is such a lovely line! As with each one of us, watching the sky at night, never ceases to amaze me: thinking how ephemeral all is.

we will continue to hold them in awe for there is much we do not know thanks Asim-10

A beautiful depiction of life through a train journey. The image of night sky filled with stars and the earth with umpteen species and tons of resources really adds to the worth n meaning of this poem. It puts the reader in a thinking mode.10 deservedly.

People throughout the ages have marveled as you do (and I) The stars keep shining, light arriving from millions of years ago, and will delight long after we're gone

definitely 10... wonderful expression