Friday, October 27, 2006

Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Have you observed the sky lately?
Plumes of tabacco grey,
The reds and purples have faded,
The blue has washed away.
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Katie Hudson
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Seán O' Muiriosa 27 October 2006

This is an excellent poem, I love the imagery and the similes here are jumping off the screen powerfully. Yes, the sky can be such a beautiful thing, and also drab... Well done! Seán

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B Reilly 27 October 2006

Quite ominous. Sort of Mordorish, eh? I just hope you are not referring to the very soul of humanity. Vivid imagery. I love the sky. What is the sky?

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Katie Hudson

Katie Hudson

Grimsby, England
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