Monday, July 10, 2017

Sky Comments

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All the way through sky and land,
Struggles man to understand,
All the tears that taint the face,
Fall down for earth to embrace.
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Chris Noir
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Jazib Kamalvi 10 July 2017

A powerful thought. A wonderful rhyme. My favourite. A great start. Carry on please. You may like to read my poem, Teachers. Thanks

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Chris Noir 13 October 2017

Thank you so much sir, you might wanna also check my new poem room 453 it's a horror tale based on western religious tales.

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