Monday, June 6, 2016

Sky... Comments

Rating: 4.8

I
am girl
with a heart
who want to fly
...
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Randhir kaur
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Dr. Antony Theodore 06 February 2021

I am girl who wants to fly. All poets who are true in their hearts want to fly. you are one of those poets. tony

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Varsha M 24 December 2020

I read about it in news. Nice to see your poem on this site. This is really beautiful verse for every girl to remind them they sre also somebody.

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Randhir Kaur 25 December 2020

In news? I didnt get it Ma'am. Please let me know. Thank you so much.

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Dr. Antony Theodore 24 December 2020

i just want to fly and know the freedom of life and the joy in the act of flying. very good poem. tony

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Siddartha Montik 30 July 2017

Touch that Sky! ! I am sure you will! nice expression!

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Kishan Negi 02 June 2017

Hi Randhir, what a lovely poem with marvellous image. Of course, you are a wonderful girl who dares to touch the blue sky. I wish you could. kishan

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Siddartha Montik 03 January 2017

as you express a Girl..! Thank you!

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Christopher Tye 19 September 2016

Wonderful poem, always aim for the skies and never sell yourself short.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 July 2016

Sky is my aim......... but beyond the skies there is a world... dont you think so...... aim beyond and you will have mystical experiences....... a student of literature can do it......... God bless u dear poetess. tony

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Randhir Kaur 08 July 2016

So kind of you Dr. John.. Keep reading. Stay connected. Thank you.

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Dr John Celes 05 July 2016

you have expressed your desire and ambition in life and if only you put your heart in the right direction, I am sure you can fly those dizzy heights by wings and sing the lovely words that describe your feelings and the things you come across in life. all the best. it takes quite a long time to somewhat mature in this field and years to master the art.

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Randhir Kaur 10 June 2016

Many thanks Kelly..it means a lot... And thank you for the information, yes I will do this..

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Kelly Kurt 10 June 2016

One never knows when that last day will be. Live to the fullest, Randhir. I am sure you will touch the sky. P.S. You can just click on reply, under each comment instead of using the above comment box. That way each person that you reply to will be notified by Poemhunter and they can know to come back to your poem to read your reply to their comment.

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Randhir Kaur 10 June 2016

Thank you Nosheen for the review...A girl with a heart can touch the sky..it have so different two meaning.. Well taken dear...

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Nosheen Irfan 10 June 2016

This poem is full of positive energy. A girl must dream high n try to pursue her dreams. This poem is very motivating for girls. A girl with a heart can touch the sky. A beautiful poem.

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Randhir Kaur 09 June 2016

Thank you Edward for your appreciation.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 June 2016

Imagination! With the muse of life. Nice work.

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Randhir Kaur 09 June 2016

Thank you Khan Sir for the feedback..

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Amazing expression Well done Keep it up Randhir Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Randhir Kaur 07 June 2016

Of course not Sir. I am a person who live now and do now in present, when I see distant things I find nothing. My present will make my future. Thank you Sir for reading.

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Kishore Kumar Das 07 June 2016

Fly high......no problem......but don't worry about the future........because worrying about the future is like trying to measure the height of the sky.

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