Monday, September 7, 2009

Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sky is where the the stars and moon flare
Same as the people amongst us glare
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Obinna Eruchie 04 October 2009

Lovely description of the sky.

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Indira Renganathan 18 September 2009

Well worded teaching poem with apt, beautiful similies10

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Rafique Farooqi 16 September 2009

well penned poem, there so many valuable words to keep in mind, as pearls of wisdom.......great....keep on writting

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2009

Sky is the limit that we can reach But beyond the sky but we can't reach.shy is the limit and we can reach beyond if we have strong resolve on our part... what a lovely write, , i lked it most... very fine piece of writing....10 read mine isolation and dark......prayer...visiting hell

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