Thursday, January 22, 2009

Skirt With A Flowery Design Comments

Rating: 5.0

I slipped into a long nightmare
Of wild, disturbing thoughts
And a river of fears.
I waited for the only woman
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Uriah Hamilton
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Sandra Fowler 28 January 2009

Powerful, evocative...your second stanza is really superb. Your beautiful poems deserve a long life. Always your friend, Sandra

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Tai Chi Italy 22 January 2009

I know this abyss Uriah and I am sure many will identify with it's pain, but falling in love, is the greatest gift we can ever have. We have to endure the pain of that pleasure. You are not wrong in thinking, they are wrong in thinking we can forget such a love, it is scarey but hiding under the skirt of god's most flowery Design, won't help either! smiling at you, Tai Loving your every word as usual x

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