Monday, September 23, 2019

Skinny-Dipping Comments

Rating: 5.0

We walked along the dusty trail,
no shoes upon our feet.

Hot summer day.
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Belle Wassermeister
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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

Ha, I can imagine, given your claim of having gained a little weight… Hilarious! 5 *s

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2022

A fantastic poem! Liked it so much

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 December 2021

Lovely humorous poem. Dear poet, you have a special talent to pen humor. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing

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Rebecca Navarre 10 July 2021

Oh, this is very adorable too! .. Such fun summer memories with friends! .. Definitely 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Captain Cur 09 March 2021

Great write, funny, poignant and always great to be hanging out with friends on those wondrous hot summer days.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 15 February 2021

There is so much naked truth in your poems it's refresh.

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Belle Wassermeister 10 September 2020

Thank you to those who have commented on this. I wish I could reply to each comment individually, but that is impossible right now because when you try to reply, there is no submit button.

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Andrew Blakemore 08 September 2020

Love this poem, well done.

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Michael Walker 16 February 2020

A very humorous poem and I wonder what 'chunky-dunked' means.

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Kim Barney 20 February 2020

Oh, come on, Michael! Surely it's not that hard to figure out! A skinny person skinny-dips, and a chunky person...

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Grace Jessen 21 October 2019

Very funny ending! Good imagery. We get the picture.

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 07 October 2019

The imagery is absolutely nice.

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James Mclain 30 September 2019

Great write reminds me of my Long ago childhood. James McLain 🎸

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Tamara Beryl Latham 29 September 2019

Nicely done, Belle. The last line is truly comedic. I loved it. Thanks for sharing. I've written this reply twice, so don't know if you; ll get to see it. : -)

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Tamara Beryl Latham 29 September 2019

Nicely done You ended with a great comedic line. I loved the poem. Thanks for sharing. : -)

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Maxim Muyu 29 September 2019

nice write, I like it.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 29 September 2019

Cool poem! I really like it. Did you coin that word “chunky-dunked”? It needs no explanation. This brings back childhood for me too. Something magical about swimming naked.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 September 2019

We saw a snake, but had no fear; just stayed out of its way. Left it alone! That's the way to treat nature... Beautiful poem.

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Bryan Norton 28 September 2019

I enjoyed your poem a lot. You kept my attention throughout. Thank you, and good luck.

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Kingsley Egbukole 27 September 2019

A beautiful experience. Kingsley Egbukole

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Zywa Zywa 27 September 2019

The humor deserves a cheerful reading aloud. Unfortunately, PoemHunter does not deliver that. Never stop with funny adventures on a summer day with friends!

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Belle Wassermeister

Belle Wassermeister

Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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