We walked along the dusty trail,
no shoes upon our feet.
Hot summer day.
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Lovely humorous poem. Dear poet, you have a special talent to pen humor. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing
Oh, this is very adorable too! .. Such fun summer memories with friends! .. Definitely 5 Stars! ...+++++
Great write, funny, poignant and always great to be hanging out with friends on those wondrous hot summer days.
There is so much naked truth in your poems it's refresh.
Thank you to those who have commented on this. I wish I could reply to each comment individually, but that is impossible right now because when you try to reply, there is no submit button.
A very humorous poem and I wonder what 'chunky-dunked' means.
Oh, come on, Michael! Surely it's not that hard to figure out! A skinny person skinny-dips, and a chunky person...
Great write reminds me of my Long ago childhood. James McLain 🎸
Nicely done, Belle. The last line is truly comedic. I loved it. Thanks for sharing. I've written this reply twice, so don't know if you; ll get to see it. : -)
Nicely done You ended with a great comedic line. I loved the poem. Thanks for sharing. : -)
Cool poem! I really like it. Did you coin that word “chunky-dunked”? It needs no explanation. This brings back childhood for me too. Something magical about swimming naked.
We saw a snake, but had no fear; just stayed out of its way. Left it alone! That's the way to treat nature... Beautiful poem.
I enjoyed your poem a lot. You kept my attention throughout. Thank you, and good luck.
The humor deserves a cheerful reading aloud. Unfortunately, PoemHunter does not deliver that. Never stop with funny adventures on a summer day with friends!
Ha, I can imagine, given your claim of having gained a little weight… Hilarious! 5 *s